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This is the heart
The mind
The soul

This is the day
The month
The year

This is the wrong
The right
The maybe

This is the word
The poem
The song

This is my red
My black
My white

This is my doing
My seeing
My taste

This is my time
My side
My place

This is my crisis
My dealing
My stretch

This is your choice
Your decision
Your thought

This is your wanting
Your calling
Your crave

This is your crime
Your prison
Your jail

This is your jewel
Your game
Your chance

This is our love
Our care
Our laugh

This is our joy
Our bliss
Our wonder

This is our secret
Our encounter
Our thing

This is our look
Our charm
Our glance
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Author's Comments

Uhm...for a special, SEMI-NEW person in my life. Uhhh, it's complicated...

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:iconblizz-kid:
Beautiful! I love this piece! Really good job! The connections you make, the things you say, and the pace you set... all brilliant. Your gift is truly skillful!

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"No one can be told what the Matrix is; you have to see it for yourself." -Morpheus
:iconthecrimsoneyedgirl:
Omg! THANK YOU!!!!!! ^^ ^^ ^^ Your advice has helped!! THANKS!!! ^^ ^^

:hug::love::boogie:

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~~~~~~~~~Crimson Lawliet~~~~~~~~~~~
~xX~If L is Justice, Crimson is Vengeance~Xx~
~~~~~~~~~~~エル・ローライト~~~~~~~~~~~
:iconblizz-kid:
No problem... maybe read some of my rhyming pieces too... you'll see how I've started to grasp rhyme scheme. Send some comments, and we can really start talkin' poetry!

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"No one can be told what the Matrix is; you have to see it for yourself." -Morpheus
:iconthecrimsoneyedgirl:
Not a problem ^^
I'll start right now ^^ ^^

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~~~~~~~~~Crimson Lawliet~~~~~~~~~~~
~xX~If L is Justice, Crimson is Vengeance~Xx~
~~~~~~~~~~~エル・ローライト~~~~~~~~~~~

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