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---This is a short poem, which I usually do not do---

The little man
Whose mind so wanders
Into increments of light
Whose timing so dasdardly
But little strength of mind

The little man
Whose life surrounds nothing
Loses parts of himself
Whose words stopped flowing
And stopped expressing themselves
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:iconblizz-kid:
Beautiful! Again, I really enjoyed this one... totally worth multiple readings!

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"No one can be told what the Matrix is; you have to see it for yourself." -Morpheus
:iconthecrimsoneyedgirl:
THANK YOU!!! ^^ I appreciate it.

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~~~~~~~~~Crimson Lawliet~~~~~~~~~~~
~xX~If L is Justice, Crimson is Vengeance~Xx~
~~~~~~~~~~~エル・ローライト~~~~~~~~~~~
:iconmrcool256:
Great... short but extremely well done and I could see it meaning different things to different people; great job!

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"You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus."- Mark Twain

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:iconthecrimsoneyedgirl:
Thanks, for the comment and the fav. ^^

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~~~~~~~~~Crimson Lawliet~~~~~~~~~~~
~xX~If L is Justice, Crimson is Vengeance~Xx~
~~~~~~~~~~~エル・ローライト~~~~~~~~~~~

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